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The Rules of the Game

Hello traveler! Welcome to :iconthecritiquables:.

some simple rules:


:bulletblue: Submissions are accepted only in the "Submission" folder

:bulletblue: mature content is surely allowed, with a tag.

:bulletblue: If you submit art, you will need to comment/critique on works featured in "Unappreciated works"
and comment on the journal with the title of the work or link


:bulletblue: Each work submitted will get one critique/comment from the Admin

:bulletblue: If either party (writer/criticizer) is rude, I want you to contact the Admin and they'll deal with it.

:bulletblue: We are accepting Admins so if you are interested, Note NotenSMSK!

:bulletblue: all the regular dA rules apply



:bulletred: Here is the Link to the present unappreciated feature! thecritiquables.deviantart.com…




Folder information:


:bulletyellow: GiD / DiD / Mature; Guy or Damsel in Distress. This means somebody is in peril.
I think "mature" speaks for itself really.
:bulletyellow: OC = original characters so for when YOU have created your characters
:bulletyellow: Fanfic: for fictions with character created by somebody else
:bulletyellow: The one Shot folders are for stories that only have the 1 part that you want to submit
:bulletyellow: Chapter stories folders are for when you have written/are writing a piece that consists out more then 1 piece.
:bulletyellow: Poetry is where all the poems and the like go.


:bulletyellow: Featured is the folder where a work we feel should be appreciated, goes


:bulletpurple:If you have any questions, suggestion or issues please don't hesitate to let us know :bulletpurple:
hi everyone :wave:

The new feature for the month of December is up (:dummy:).

So, the works for the month of December are:

jackgunski

Treetops
I saw the mountains stretching into infinity.
These red brick mountains, monuments of someone’s achievements,
somewhere.
The walls never stopped,
the mountain went up forever and
I was back where I started.
I climbed up each step, forever.
Look into infinity,
look into infinity and blink.
I saw the fields before me,
a single road covered in yellow leaves, not dead
because they had life again.
They had life on this waterlogged road,
they were flat, but they jumped
and if you looked at them long enough
you could see on the edge of your perception
something,
just look into infinity,
look into infinity and blink.
I danced on the treetops,
They bounced beneath my toes.
I saw the world.
I saw it in the distance,
and while I was far away for a moment,
while I was away from the tragedy,
my own thoughts,
I was free.
Look ahead,
beyond the buildings,
the roads,
just up ahead, there it is.
Look into infinity.
Look into infinity, and blink.
The Watching Man
We can see you, and
our stares can send you to the
black oblivion.
Nostalgia
I sit at my desk, and turn on my record player.
It’s Unforgettable by Nat King Cole.
An orange hue floats out from my desk lamp,
and hits my eyes like a flood of memories.
Each thought pumps happiness into my mind.
It is a distant happiness, not one I can touch.
My head slumps down to my desk.
It’s a deep mahogany.
I look into the scratches, I smell the lacquer.
Every fiber of the wood seems to cry out,
And so I weep.
And so I weep.
Stranger Words
We are never talk so well,
Things to say we cannot tell.
Words from small to bigger man,
learn to live, while living can.
Face with eyes and mouth don’t move,
Nothing saying, does not prove.
If you hearing through the fuzz,
learn to be, while being does.
Where beyond the quiet place,
search to see the change of face,
use your time left just to see,
be a living, live to free.
leaving now, but hear before,
easy caring, to ignore.
Do not to hear these words ban,
learn to love, while loving can.


mjponso

Steel Your Heart: Ch. 1<b> (posting one because this is a chaptered series, and hence it should be read from the first chapter onward)

bookloverblue

Grimm Truths: Snow White (Monologue) by bookloverblue E.M.U - Episode 2: Meeting Prof. Varicella by bookloverblue


Now, the rules for submission are as follows:
* One critique allows you to submit one deviations, two critiques allows you to submit three deviations and three critiques or more allows you to submit five deviations for the whole month.
* You have to link/thumb the work which you have provided a critique on, to this journal.
* Number of deviations featured is based on how many critiques are given – they are equal to the number of critiques – one up till three.
It is not compulsory but will be appreciated if you mention “This critique is on behalf of TheCritiquables” in your critique.

If you have any further questions, do ask – we will update them.

Happy submitting :) Cheers.
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:iconjackgunski:
jackgunski Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
*looks for a new feature...* Nope...
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:iconshehrozeameen:
shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry, the new feature hasn't been uploaded yet. Mostly waiting for the end of the month for now.
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:iconjackgunski:
jackgunski Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
Taking the month off? :D
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:iconshehrozeameen:
shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No, no. Will get to the deviations. Just been too busy lately.
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LindaBostic Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, hey..thanx for the add.....
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:iconastrid-chan26:
astrid-chan26 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
sorry for the stupid question but... how do i do this:
"comment on the journal with the title of the work or link"
i already commented on a unnapreciated work malintra-shadowmoon.deviantart…
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:iconshehrozeameen:
shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
1) Go here:  Unappreciated Works Feature #17 (new format)hi everyone :wave:
I do sincerely apologize for the temporary closing of the submissions folder. :raincloud: Really, really sorry for the inconvenience.
BUT!
The new feature for the month of June is up.
And this time with some restructuring as well as a new layout that might be easier for everyone to follow :dummy:
*people's response*
So, the works for the month of June are:
jackgunski

Malintra-Shadowmoon

PaleAuthor

bookloverblue
The LAFTAW Agents - Alternative Character Intros by bookloverblue The LAFTAW Agents - The Hunt is On by bookloverblue
Fundelstein
Spelunking by Fundelstein Masquerade by Fundelstein There's Lots of Splendor in Serkonos by Fundelstein
mjponso
UNFINISHED: Night by mjponso Consequence by mjponso [Amy] Burn, Baby, Burn: Ch. 1 by mjponso
Now, the rules for submission are as follows:
• One critique allows you to submit one deviations, two critiques allows you to submit three deviations and three critiques or more allows you to submit five de


2) on your critique, add about 100 more words. Describe what it meant for you, whether you feel that it can be improved. Things like any line which stood out and why, or whether there was some book or concept from the poem which you really liked as it evoked a nostalgia or something. And finally, on an ending note, what was the take home message you got from the poem.

3) Copy the link of your comment (click on the "comment" link on the header of the comment) and paste it onto the journal which has been linked.

4) Then you can submit.

And it isn't a stupid question. Its an FAQ we get often, don't worry about it. Follow these steps and you'll be fine.

By the way, Welcome to the group :)
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